We were learning about using poetic language like metaphors. This is a metaphor about my older cousin. I choose her because she is very inspiring to me.
I like how you described your cousin as the smile you have everyday. It's nice to know that you're learning about growing up and I like how you added the word 'ADOLESCENCE.' Keep up the amazing work and you inspire me to keep learning,
Awesome story, Your metaphors are very specific and they weren't randomly picked. I love how you used 'she is an angel sent from heaven. I also like how you wrote a small description about what is was about.
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I like how you described your cousin as the smile you have everyday. It's nice to know that you're learning about growing up and I like how you added the word 'ADOLESCENCE.' Keep up the amazing work and you inspire me to keep learning,
nice story about your cousin sussy....
Awesome story,
Your metaphors are very specific and they weren't randomly picked. I love how you used 'she is an angel sent from heaven. I also like how you wrote a small description about what is was about.
That was a amazing metaphor poem about your cousin. I liked how you came up with those metaphors. Well Done
Alison ;)
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